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Re: Girlfriends and boyfriends at the age of 10 - 15
I've got to agree with the deppends. I don't know if this is a cultural thing, but one of my friends who turned 16 recently but started dating his girlfriend ...
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: Winning Over Winchester (Chapter 1)
It was Christmastime, freezing cold, and snowing. An old beggar sat on the street corner, singing for passer-bys . He sang a song that he had written. It was mostly ...
Jan 21, 2010 -
Re: Ignorance was never Bliss: *correct* Prologue and Chapter 1
Ahhh. The smell of a review!! I already apologize if this review isn't really helpfull, since this is the first review I've done in a while... (6-8 months) :D Here ...
Jan 20, 2010 -
Re: [Open] octo's got some free time...
Would you review this for me?
Sep 12, 2009 -
Re: Antigone's Critique Shop
Hiya! Haven't seen you in a while. =) I have this one piece I need (want) you to review... Please. :) Name:And There Was Drum Roll. Genre: Fantasy brief: It's ...
Sep 12, 2009 -
Re: Reviews by Carlito :)
Please review!!!
Sep 12, 2009 -
Re: Lithium
I read the preface and I liked it. Now this chapter... I don't know how to describe it. I just noticed things like you have friendly vampires, who heal people, ...
Sep 12, 2009 -
Re: Lithium-preface
First I want to notify you that you are changing your tenses in this piece, and that annoys me and somehow confuses me a bit. For example: It was my ...
Sep 12, 2009 -
Re: I'm back
I'm back! Mwahahahaa! And you can't stop me. I was gone for an amazing 4-6 months! I can't believe it myself. I have noticed that the activity of the Finish ...
Sep 11, 2009 -
Re: So I am back
Welcome back. I missed you.... Who are you exactly? =P
Sep 11, 2009 -
Re: Report a good member!
Demeter - She is a great person, great reviews and fun to talk with. Evi - Thanks for all the advice! Nate - for being righteous and also a genius ...
Sep 11, 2009 -
Re: Personality Test
Your Type is ENTP Extraverted Intuitive Thinking Perceiving 56% 62% 1% 11% I work on intuition and perceiving. Husaaah!
Sep 11, 2009 -
Re: Pretty Fish
The fish is cool and the water is nice. The eyes make it seem more human than fish though. Those manga style eyes are always cool. XD They make your ...
Sep 11, 2009 -
Re: New song!
First.... More verse! With all due respect most pieces, mainstream or not normally have at least 3 verses, sometimes 2 but they repeat the first in the end to get ...
Sep 11, 2009 -
Re: Bound :: Ch 2 :: being revised
I will relate to Magnusbanefan13 on this one and ask: Why are they being bound to animals? Is this something like daemons from the golden compass or more from like ...
Sep 11, 2009
